So Dark

dilapidated

There’s beauty in the strangest places

unknown and familiar faces

where the dilapidated

buildings give character

to the wonder of

me and you. Told

from the dark,

inside

eaves.

 

NaPoWriMo – Write a 9-line poem.  My attempt at a nonet.

Poetic Asides – Take the phrase “So (blank),” replace the blank with a word or phrase.  Make the new phrase the title of your poem.

 

 

 

 

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4 comments on “So Dark

  1. jillys2016 says:

    Bravo! I love to write in forms and this one is tougher than it appears. The enjambment is quite effective 🙂

    Like

  2. Singledust says:

    oh yes! I loved this. beauty in broken down places just like we are inside.

    Like

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