A Pond Reflection

Upon reflection

remember the sun

still shines.

 

Deep in direction

further inspection

rays climb.

 

Oasis to stun

explore affection

pond side.

 

dVerse – Victoria asks us to write a lai.ย  Find out more about this tricky but fun form by stopping by the pub, and writing one of your own.

 

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36 comments on “A Pond Reflection

  1. Sumana Roy says:

    Nice shiny words ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Kathy Reed says:

    Unusual and very well done!

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  3. lillian says:

    Clever take on the form. I especially love how the title and the first line fit together….like puzzle pieces when they mesh.

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  4. jillys2016 says:

    You always blend word play with sublte truth in such a disarming way. I am a fan of your talent, my friend!

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  5. I like this! Very peaceful and a clever play on words.

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  6. Charley says:

    Nice personal reflection piece. Pond as metaphor and reality. We have one out back, and that’s how it rolls!

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  7. Ah, pond side and sun’s reflection … a nice place to be. Well done.

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  8. I found myself in reverie at the side of the pond. Ancient druids used many methods to still the mind and open the door. Staring into fire, shiny convex metal and that’s what this piece had me doing. I could see both the dazzle surface and dark depths, both stunned and exploring affection.
    ‘That’ is a good poem ! thank you

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  9. Nikki says:

    Such nice lines

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  10. I did enjoy this, Lynn. A little bit of sunshine is in order here, today–another one that’s mostly gray. Sitting by water is such a stilling experience for most people. It is cleansing. Thanks for this.

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  11. frankhubeny says:

    Nice meditation by the pond.

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  12. I like the message in this one, especially the first stanza.

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  13. I almost expecting to hear the sound of a frog jumping… ๐Ÿ™‚ Love it

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  14. jerennazuto says:

    Such a beautiful picture the poem paints. I would love to be there at that pond side. Well done.

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  15. Singledust says:

    I like the inspiration from your Lai. your words point towards always remembering our blessings of a new day and new opportunity.

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