Surface Ripples

Trance

walk

shadows

whisper touch

within miracle

pins a rancid water ripple

a glittering, hopeful heartbeat

that floats down stream from

the surface

ignites

calm

peace

 

Sunday Whirl  – A Fib, forward and backward.

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8 comments on “Surface Ripples

  1. jillys2016 says:

    Ignite calm – wow! I love how you painted the picture and played with the words. Fun form, huh?

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  2. Singledust says:

    pins a rancid water ripple – WOW! this said a lie told over so many times it became so distasteful – the words you spun in this were really precise! that’s how I can describe it. Precise!

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  3. Thank you Lynn, a flicker book of images, flash cards of thought you can’t ignore. Like an electric shot to the synapses.

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