Drinking of you

Sheer drunkenness snatched

her rooted disposition.

In one single move

tattered feelings spun and lashed;

dust-covered heart blinks sly curve.

 

Sunday Whirl

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18 comments on “Drinking of you

  1. Jae Rose says:

    A clever use of the prompt words

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Tom Merriman says:

    Oh, a really nice use of the words, Lynn!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Love your title. And the piece!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. In one single move
    tattered feelings spun and lashed;

    Drunkenness can result in a big disadvantage

    Hank

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  5. jillys2016 says:

    Spun and lashed – that is a wonderfully crafted bit of wording!

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