The Window

window 2

Watercolor splash
sunset shadow play canvas
inky leaves hover
over rooftops and sizzle-
sift through wide open windows.

 

Lillian is hosting over at dVerse today and asks us to write about the view from our windows, looking in/looking out.

 

 

Advertisements

33 comments on “The Window

  1. Classic Burton piece ! Every line spoils the reader with treats from Lynn’s box of magic word art.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Lovely, vivid words to complement a restful, calm image.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. lillian says:

    Gorgeous write….your words stand alone beautifully. And, they also describe your view! The pale sunset colors are indeed a water color canvas here — and “inky leaves” is the perfect description of their lacey look as the sun is retreating. So glad you posted to the prompt!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. qbit says:

    “inky leaves hover” is a great image!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Janice says:

    ‘Sizzle-sift through wide open windows’ … love this phrase. I like how your poem ‘camera’ brings us in from the distant view.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Charley says:

    “sunset shadow play…” yes! You hint at what sunset watchers know… the longer you watch, the more of the show there is. You have written well; tanka done with perfection.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. jillys2016 says:

    A Tanka! Really enjoy the sounds of the words – sizzle – sift. Your words are ever fresh, Lynn.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. This is so well expressed, Lynn. I have a confession though–it frustrates me because all I want to do is paint when I read such watercolor-words and my plate is already too full. What’s a girl to do?

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice description of the sunset through the window shades. The dark trees do appear “inky”.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. kim881 says:

    A gorgeous splash of watercolour, Lynn, and I love the inky leaves that ‘sizzle-sift’ through open windows!

    Liked by 1 person

  11. Kathy Reed says:

    Your view is full of possibilities given any time of day…short and suzzle-sweet 🙂

    Like

  12. Kathy Reed says:

    Your view is full of possibilities given any time of day…short and sizzle-sweet 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Jael Sook says:

    Oh wow, this is too good–I’ve been missing out, better Follow 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  14. kanzensakura says:

    Lovely poem. Inky leaves hover – delicious words. The view is lovely as well. I enjoyed the view from your window very much.

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s